Sattasvaara Slasher - a script idea and a short screenplay

 

WORKING TITLE: Sattasvaara Slasher

GENRE:

Classic summer-camp slasher in the vein of Friday the 13th

SETTING:

A remote forest near Sodankylä
Camp location: Sattasvaara Wilderness Camp

The dialogue is in English, sprinkled with Finnish curse words and mixed Scandinavian accents.


LOGLINE

A group of UK, Finnish, Swedish, and Estonian friends—meeting in person for the first time after years in an online movie community—travel to the remote forests of Sattasvaara for a weekend camping trip. But the local legend of the “Sattasvaara Slasher” turns out to be horrifyingly true when an uninvited, hockey-masked killer begins stalking them one by one.


THE LEGEND

Told early in the movie by a local shopkeeper from Sodankylä village:

“Up there in Sattasvaara… a boy drowned in the bog after campers bullied him. They say he grew up twisted, hiding in the forest, wearing a mask to hide his rotten face. Hullu perkele… If you hear branches snapping but no wind… run.”

They call him The Sattasvaara Slasher.

Killer look:
Hockey mask, worn winter coat, heavy boots, machete + improvised forest tools.


CHARACTER GROUP

The campers are members of a Discord movie community:

1. Jamie (UK) – charismatic, loud, “organizer”

2. Mark (UK) – sarcastic, horror buff

3. Aino (Finland) – outdoorsy, calm, knows real Finnish wilderness

4. Tuomas (Finland) – drops random Finnish curse words constantly

5. Freja (Sweden) – friendly, upbeat, loves filming everything

6. Henrik (Sweden) – quiet, logical, hates camping but came anyway

7. Maarika (Estonia) – confident, dry humor

8. Rasmus (Estonia) – tries too hard to look brave


STORY STRUCTURE

ACT I — ARRIVAL

Cold Open:
Two local teens sneak into the Sattasvaara camp at dusk to drink. One goes to “take a leak” and is silently taken by the Slasher. The other finds his friend’s body hung from a pine tree like a warning before the killer charges. Smash cut to title.

The Group Arrives:
They arrive in a rented van, arguing about Finnish mosquitoes, British snacks, and “how dark Lapland gets at night even in summer.”

Funny Discord-style banter:

Mark: “This is where we die because Jamie can’t read a map.”
Tuomas: “Älä viitsi, it’s perfectly fine. Maybe. If the bears don’t f*** us first.”
Freja: “That sounded reassuring. Totally.”

They set up camp. Aino tells them about the local legend.

Aino: “People say Sattasvaara is haunted by some masked hermit.”
Jamie: “Brilliant. Didn't bring a gun, but I did bring marshmallows.”


ACT II — NIGHTFALL AND THE FIRST KILLS

Tension builds:
Strange sounds in the forest. A heavy silhouette watching.
A mutilated reindeer carcass found near camp.

Kill 1 – Henrik:
Goes to collect firewood alone. The killer emerges silently and snaps his neck against a tree. The group assumes he “wandered off.”

Kill 2 – Freja:
Filming a vlog near the lake. Killer rises behind her from the water (classic homage to the ending of Friday the 13th Part II). Camera falls into the moss.

The group finds her camera, not her.


ACT III — THE DISCOVERY

Bodies begin appearing around camp arranged ritualistically.

Maarika panics in Estonian. Jamie tries to calm everyone but fails.
Aino realizes:

“Someone’s hunting us… Ei saatana… we need to move!”

They try to leave, but their van has been sabotaged—battery ripped out, tires slashed.

Kill 3 – Rasmus:
Impaled with a sharpened tree branch. The killer drags him into the dark.

Mark finds the shopkeeper’s warning was right:
They see the killer’s hut: bone charms, old photos, rusted tools, a child’s winter glove pinned to the wall.


ACT IV — FINAL CHASE

Only Aino, Jamie, Mark, and Tuomas remain.

They attempt to escape through the bog.
Mark is grabbed from beneath the peat and pulled down.

Jamie’s Heroic Moment:
Sacrifices himself to distract the slasher so Aino and Tuomas can run.

Jamie (yelling):
“COME ON YOU FROZEN-FACED WANKER!”

Jamie is hacked down.

Final Survivor: Aino
She baits the killer near a cliffside ravine. He charges, slips on loose gravel, and falls into darkness.

She collapses, sobbing, saying:
“Perkele… it’s over.”


EPILOGUE

Morning. Rescue helicopters arrive.

Aino looks down into the ravine—
The body is gone.

Only the hockey mask remains on a rock.

Cue sequel tease.

TONE & STYLE

  • Classic early-80s slasher pacing

  • English dialogue with scattered Finnish swears: “Saatana,” “Perkele,” “Vittu”

  • Atmospheric Lapland forest visuals

  • Killer shown in shadows until Act II

  • Brutal but practical-effects-style kills

FADE IN:


TITLE CARD:

                         SATTASVAARA SLASHER


INT. BLACK


We hear distant WIND in the trees. A tiny, tinny SPEAKER starts playing Finnish rap.


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EXT. SATTASVAARA CLEARING – NIGHT


A small CLEARING deep in the forest.


PINJA (17, Finnish, dyed hair) and JONI (17, Finnish, hoodie) sit on a fallen log, drinking cheap BEER. A portable SPEAKER plays nearby.


Moonlight filters through tall pine trunks.


                                PINJA

                  We’re actually doing this. Sattasvaara

                  at night.

                      (grins)

                  Tää on niin tyhmää.


                                JONI

                  Exactly. That’s why it’s fun.

                  Anyway, the stories are bullshit.


He makes a half-hearted “wooOOO” ghost noise. She smacks his arm.


                                PINJA

                  Shut up. I don’t want to think about

                  some iso jätkä with a knife.


                                JONI

                  If some guy in a hockey mask shows up,

                  I’ll just say I’m a fan.


She snorts, takes a swig.


A BRANCH SNAPS somewhere in the trees.


Both freeze.


                                PINJA

                  Did you hear that?


                                JONI

                  Probably reindeer. Or some drunk Russian

                  lost again.


He stands, cups his hands and shouts into the dark.


                                JONI (CONT’D)

                  Hei, poro! Tule tänne, otetaan selfie!


Pinja laughs nervously.


The forest goes eerily quiet. No wind. No insects.


Joni’s smile fades a little.


                                PINJA

                  Let’s go home. Seriously.


                                JONI

                  We just got here.


He walks toward the TREELINE, phone in hand.


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EXT. TREELINE – CONTINUOUS


Joni’s PHONE LIGHT cuts through the darkness.


Just trunks. Branches. Moss.


He steps closer, raises the phone. The light lands on a WHITE HOCKEY MASK, seemingly hanging from a branch at eye level.


Joni jumps, then laughs.


                                JONI

                  Okay, that’s actually pretty good.

                  Someone’s messing with—


The mask moves. It’s being WORN.


A MASSIVE FIGURE steps out of the shadows: COAT, GLOVES, HOCKEY MASK.


The SATTASVAARA SLASHER.


Joni’s laughter dies.


                                JONI (CONT’D)

                      (small)

                  Uh... terve?


The masked figure stares. Silent.


The MACHETE-LIKE BLADE flashes. Joni gasps—then his phone hits the ground, light spinning.


From the phone POV, we see his legs collapse. Twitch. Go still.


A BOOT steps into frame, kicks the phone aside.


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EXT. CLEARING – SAME TIME


Pinja scrolls on her phone, bored.


                                PINJA

                  Okei, lopeta pelleily, Joni!

                  Tuu takas!


No answer.


She sighs, stands, walks toward the TREES.


                                PINJA (CONT’D)

                  If you jump out, I swear I’ll—


Something THUDS in front of her.


JONI’S BODY drops from a tree, hanging upside down by a rope around his ankle. His throat is slashed. Blood drips onto the moss.


Pinja SCREAMS, stumbling back and slipping. Her phone skitters away.


As she scrambles up, she sees him—


The SLASHER behind Joni’s swaying body. Motionless. Watching.


Pinja turns to RUN.


She makes it three steps before a GLOVED HAND grabs her by the hair and yanks her backward, dragging her into the dark.


Her SCREAM echoes through the trees.


                                                            SMASH CUT TO:


TITLE CARD:

                         SATTASVAARA SLASHER


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. LAPLAND HIGHWAY – DUSK


A lonely two-lane ROAD cuts through endless pines. Orange evening sky.


A RENTED VAN barrels along.


                                                            CUT TO:


INT. RENTED VAN – MOVING – DUSK


Eight adults, mid-20s to early 30s, packed in with camping gear.


JAMIE (UK, charismatic) drives.  

AINO (Finnish, practical) in the passenger seat with MAP and GPS.


In the back:  

MARK (UK, sarcastic),  

TUOMAS (Finnish, beanie, swears casually),  

FREJA (Swedish, bright, vlogger with camera),  

HENRIK (Swedish, reserved),  

MAARIKA (Estonian, dry),  

RASMUS (Estonian, cocky).


Freja films with a small CAMERA, pointed at everyone.


                                FREJA

                  Okay, say hi to Discord, campers.


                                MARK

                      (to camera)

                  This is the part of the horror movie

                  where you think they’re fun, then they

                  all die horribly.


                                JAMIE

                  Cheers, mate. Great energy.


                                TUOMAS

                  No worries, we die later. Now we just

                  suffer mosquitoes. Vittu.


Laughter.


                                MAARIKA

                  So, this is the first time all of us

                  meet in real life, and we immediately

                  go to some murder forest?


                                RASMUS

                  Exactly. It’s method acting. We’re

                  the victims now.


                                AINO

                  It’s not a murder forest. It’s just...

                  remote.


                                HENRIK

                  You said the nearest town was... how far?


                                AINO

                  Sodankylä is like forty minutes that

                  way.

                      (points back)

                  Sattasvaara is peaceful.

                  I came near here as a kid.


                                MARK

                  Yeah, and nothing bad has ever happened

                  in a peaceful, remote place. Definitely

                  not in any slasher movies.


                                JAMIE

                  We’re a horror movie Discord. This is

                  pilgrimage.


                                TUOMAS

                  Also, Jamie booked it already. Too late

                  now, perkele.


They laugh.


The van rattles over a bump.


                                FREJA

                  Okay, for the vlog — say your username

                  and your biggest wrong opinion about movies.


Groans.


                                JAMIE

                  Username: ModJamie.

                  Biggest wrong opinion: slashers are cozy.


                                MARK

                  That is not wrong, that is correct.


                                AINO

                  Username: kinoaino.

                  Wrong opinion: I like slow movies where

                  nothing happens.


                                MARK

                  That’s not wrong, that’s just Scandinavian.


                                TUOMAS

                  Username: TuomasTappaja.

                  Wrong opinion: the remake of The Thing

                  was... not that bad.


                                MARK

                  Kick him. Kick him from the server. IRL.


                                MAARIKA

                  Username: maarika_makes_memes.

                  Wrong opinion: jump scares are fun,

                  you are all just babies.


                                RASMUS

                  Username: Razzor_666.

                  Wrong opinion: practical effects are

                  overrated, CGI is fine.


Everyone:


                                ALL

                  BOOOOO.


                                JAMIE

                  Mute. Time out. Ban.


                                AINO

                      (grins)

                  We’re removing your role when we get

                  back. “CGI Enjoyer (Punished).”


                                HENRIK

                  Username: henr1k.

                  Wrong opinion: I don’t like camping but

                  I came anyway.


                                MARK

                  That’s just an opinion, not a movie take.


                                HENRIK

                  Movie take: I fell asleep during the

                  original Friday the 13th.


Gasps.


                                TUOMAS

                  Heretic.


                                FREJA

                      (to camera)

                  For posterity: if we die in the Finnish

                  woods, blame this van full of cursed takes.


They laugh as the van disappears into the deepening forest.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. SMALL GAS STATION – DUSK


The van pulls into a lonely GAS STATION. Fluorescent lights buzz.


They spill out, stretching and grabbing snacks and supplies.


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INT. GAS STATION – DUSK


Aino pays at the counter. The ELDERLY SHOPKEEPER (60s, Finnish, weathered) rings her up.


He eyes the group.


                                SHOPKEEPER

                      (in Finnish)

                  Turisteja? -- Tourists?


                                AINO

                      (switching to English)

                  Friends from online. We’re camping up

                  at Sattasvaara.


The Shopkeeper stiffens.


                                SHOPKEEPER

                  Sattasvaara...

                      (shakes head)

                  You should pick another place.


                                AINO

                  We already booked the camp.


                                SHOPKEEPER

                  People disappear up there. Every few

                  years. Hunters, hikers... kids.

                      (leans in)

                  They say there’s a man in the forest.

                  Won’t show his face. Hullu perkele.

                  If you hear branches break and there

                  is no wind... you run. Ymmärrätkö?


                                AINO

                      (uneasy smile)

                  Yeah. I understand.


Tuomas approaches with armfuls of BEER.


                                TUOMAS

                  Hei, we have beer. We’ll be fine.


                                SHOPKEEPER

                  Beer doesn’t stop a knife, poika.


The group heads out, still laughing.


The Shopkeeper watches them go, worried.


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EXT. FOREST ROAD / SATTASVAARA SIGN – TWILIGHT


The van turns onto a GRAVEL ROAD.


A faded wooden SIGN:


                         SATTASVAARA WILDERNESS


The trees close in.


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EXT. SATTASVAARA CAMP – NIGHT (JUST AFTER SUNSET)


A clearing deep in the forest.


FIRE PIT. Old SHEDS. A locked MAIN CABIN. The looming TREELINE.


The van pulls in. They unload gear.


                                JAMIE

                  Welcome to the middle of nowhere.


                                FREJA

                  This is so cool.


She films the treeline.


                                HENRIK

                  This is so cold.


                                MAARIKA

                  It’s summer. You’re Swedish.

                  Toughen up.


Aino checks the cabin door.


                                AINO

                  Main cabin is locked. We’ll camp

                  outside like planned.

                      (points)

                  Tents there, fire pit here, forest

                  everywhere. Try not to get lost.


                                MARK

                  Those are famous last words.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. SATTASVAARA CAMP – LATER – NIGHT


TENTS are set up. A FIRE burns. They sit around it, eating, drinking.


                                FREJA

                  Okay, horror nerds. Campfire story time.

                  Someone tell us a local legend.


All eyes go to Aino.


                                MAARIKA

                  Yeah, forest girl. Something spooky.


Aino sighs, then settles in.


                                AINO

                  Fine. There is an old story...

                  They say a boy lived near here, decades

                  ago. His family was... strange.

                  He was bullied by campers. Beaten,

                  chased into the marsh. One night he fell

                  in a bog and disappeared.


The fire pops.


                                AINO (CONT’D)

                  They found only his jacket and his hat.

                  Body never showed up.

                  Some say he drowned. Others say he

                  dragged himself out, hurt and broken,

                  and stayed in the forest.


                                MARK

                  You’re just describing a Finnish Jason.


                                AINO

                  Kids in school said he covers his face

                  with an old hockey mask so you don’t see

                  what the forest did to it.

                  If he sees you, he doesn’t want you

                  to leave. That’s the rule.


                                TUOMAS

                  Of course he wears a hockey mask.

                  This is Finland.


                                JAMIE

                  Sodankylä’s own slasher icon.

                  We should sell merch.


                                FREJA

                      (camera up)

                  Already filming.


She zooms toward the dark treeline.


A branch SNAPS somewhere off in the forest.


They all go still.


                                RASMUS

                  That’s him. We’re dead.

                  Nice to meet you all.


Tuomas cups his hands, shouting into the dark.


                                TUOMAS

                  Terve, Sattasvaara! Bring beer if you

                  come kill us!


Laughter breaks the tension.


They relax, passing a bottle of vodka.


                                RASMUS

                  So, most cursed movie we watched

                  together?


                                MAARIKA

                  The Latvian found footage with the

                  potato cellar demon.


                                MARK

                  Filmed on a toaster.


                                JAMIE

                  There were fifty people in voice,

                  just spamming skull emojis.


                                AINO

                  And Tuomas yelling "vittu" at every

                  jump scare.


                                TUOMAS

                  Authentic Finnish commentary.


                                FREJA

                  I joined during the Italian zombie

                  marathon.


                                HENRIK

                      (deadpan)

                  I joined during Bad Shark Week.

                  Worst decision of my life.


                                MARK

                  No, worst decision is coming to Lapland

                  with us.


                                MAARIKA

                      (to Aino)

                  Say something very Finnish about this fire.


Aino stares into the flames.


                                AINO

                  This is nice.


Beat.


                                MARK

                  That’s it?


                                AINO

                  Yeah. That means it’s perfect.


                                TUOMAS

                  In Finland, if we say something is

                  "quite okay," that is basically love.


                                FREJA

                  In Sweden we just apologize the whole time.


                                HENRIK

                      (automatically)

                  Sorry.


                                MAARIKA

                  In Estonia we sit by the fire and look

                  like we hate each other, but secretly

                  we’re happy.


                                RASMUS

                  If an Estonian says "it’s fine,"

                  it means this is the best day of

                  their life.


They laugh. The fire burns lower.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. SATTASVAARA CAMP – LATER THAT NIGHT


The fire is embers. They drift off.


Aino and Jamie tidy up supplies. Mark and Tuomas still sit, talking quietly.


Freja heads toward her tent with her camera. Henrik wanders toward the trees with a flashlight.


                                HENRIK

                      (mutters)

                  If I pee near the tents, someone

                  complains. Out here, someone stabs me.

                  Great choices.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. DARK TREES – CONTINUOUS


Henrik finishes peeing, zips up, turns to go. He hears a HEAVY FOOTSTEP.


He shines his FLASHLIGHT. Nothing.


                                HENRIK

                      (to himself)

                  All in my head.


He turns—


The SLASHER is suddenly RIGHT BEHIND HIM. Mask fills the light.


Henrik gasps.


A GLOVED HAND clamps his throat, SLAMS him back against a tree. A sickening CRACK as his neck twists.


The flashlight falls to the moss, flickering.


The killer drags Henrik’s body into the dark.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. SATTASVAARA CAMP – SAME TIME


By the dying fire, Mark and Tuomas talk in low voices, phones out.


                                MARK

                      (no signal)

                  Zero bars. This is barbaric. I can’t

                  even post memes about how I’m going to die.


                                TUOMAS

                  Take a screenshot in your mind.

                  Post later.


                                RASMUS (O.S.)

                  We should’ve done a live watch party

                  from here. Forest commentary track.


We reveal RASMUS leaning out of his tent.


                                RASMUS (CONT’D)

                  "We are currently being stalked by a

                  Finnish man with a knife. Press play...

                  now."


                                MARK

                  I want my last act on Earth to be

                  dropping a cursed reaction image.


Tuomas types in a notes app.


                                MARK (CONT’D)

                  What are you writing, manifesto?


                                TUOMAS

                  Drafting my message for #general

                  when we get back.

                      (reads)

                  "Trip report: Lapland. Pros: vibes, trees.

                  Cons: murdered by local cryptid."


                                RASMUS

                  Add: "Ping @modjamie to unban me

                  from the afterlife."


They fall quiet.


A faint noise outside. Branches.


                                RASMUS (CONT’D)

                      (hushed)

                  Did you hear something?


They listen.


Then a distant ZIPPER from another tent. Footsteps.


They exhale.


                                TUOMAS

                  Probably someone going to piss.

                  Or Sattasvaara Slasher queuing for

                  the bathroom.


                                MARK

                  At least he’s polite.


They settle down.


Outside, at the treeline, the SLASHER stands, barely visible, watching the camp.


                                                            DISSOLVE TO:


EXT. SATTASVAARA CAMP – MORNING


Grey, misty light. Mosquitoes.


Aino crawls out of her tent, stretching.


Jamie follows, hair wild.


                                JAMIE

                  Morning, Lapland.


Aino tends a POT over the fire.


Jamie peers in skeptically.


                                JAMIE (CONT’D)

                  What is that? It looks like wallpaper paste.


                                AINO

                  Porridge.


                                MARK

                      (joining)

                  That’s not porridge, that’s a side quest.


Tuomas sips from a mug.


                                TUOMAS

                  This is good. Keeps you warm.

                  Better than your sugar-cereal shit.


Freja and Henrik’s tent flap remains closed.


Freja emerges from her tent, but Henrik’s stays still.


                                FREJA

                  Do we have coffee, or do we die now?


                                AINO

                  Thermos. Filter coffee.

                  Not fancy Stockholm stuff.


                                HENRIK’S TENT

                  (silent)


Maarika and Rasmus stumble out.


                                MAARIKA

                  What’s for breakfast?


                                AINO

                  Porridge.


                                MAARIKA

                  ...Is there vodka?


                                RASMUS

                  Or black bread at least?


                                AINO

                  Eat porridge, you’ll live longer.


                                MARK

                  Why would I want that after this weekend?


They laugh.


Aino glances around.


                                AINO (CONT’D)

                  Where’s Henrik?


They look at his tent. Still zipped.


Jamie walks over, knocks the fabric lightly.


                                JAMIE

                  Rise and shine, man. Henrik?


No answer. He unzips: the tent is EMPTY.


They exchange a look.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. TREES NEAR CAMP – MORNING


They spread out, calling.


                                MARK

                  Henrik! We accept your apology for

                  hating camping!


                                RASMUS

                  Dude, seriously. Stop hiding.

                  This is not funny.


                                AINO

                      (worried)

                  He wouldn’t wander far. Not after dark.


                                TUOMAS

                  Maybe he went back to the road?

                  Maybe he hated it that much.


                                FREJA

                  Without telling anyone?


Aino looks toward the deeper forest, uneasy.


                                AINO

                      (soft)

                  Ei helvetti...


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. SATTASVAARA CAMP – LATER – MIDDAY


They regroup at the VAN.


                                JAMIE

                  Okay. We wait a bit.

                  If he’s not back in two hours, we drive

                  to the gas station, ask if they’ve

                  seen him.


                                MARK

                  And if he’s actually dead, we are going

                  to feel like massive arseholes.


                                TUOMAS

                  We already are.

                  No change.


They try to shake it off, making breakfast, messing with phones (no signal). Freja sets up a CAMERA for timelapse.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. LAKESIDE – AFTERNOON


A dark, still LAKE ringed with pines.


Freja walks along the shore, vlogging.


                                FREJA

                      (to camera)

                  Okay, Discord, this is the lake near

                  Sattasvaara camp. Extremely spooky,

                  very pretty. Ten out of ten would be

                  murdered here.


She laughs, pans over the water.


In the distant treeline, a faint SHAPE—then gone.


She kneels, filming mushrooms and moss.


As she stands, the CAMERA briefly catches the SLASHER at the tree line, watching.


She turns that way. He’s already vanished.


                                FREJA (CONT’D)

                  Huh.


She shrugs, keeps going.


She reaches a fallen log.


                                FREJA (CONT’D)

                  This is where I do the classic horror

                  monologue. "If I die, tell them it

                  was the mosquitoes..."


Behind her, the SLASHER rises from the water, silent.


Gloved hands clamp her shoulders, yank her back.


The CAMERA falls to the moss, lens pointed up.


We see kicking legs, struggling, a looming figure.


A muffled SCREAM. Then stillness.


Boots drag her body out of frame.


The camera keeps recording sky and branches.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. CAMP – AFTERNOON


Back at camp, the others sit around, restless.


                                RASMUS

                  Freja’s taking forever with her artsy shots.


                                MAARIKA

                  She probably got lost in an Instagram

                  filter.


                                MARK

                  We still have no Henrik, no signal,

                  and this place is officially crap.


                                AINO

                  I’ll check the lake. She wanted shots

                  there.


                                JAMIE

                  I’ll go with you.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. LAKESIDE – LATER


Aino and Jamie arrive. They see FREJA’S CAMERA on the moss, still recording.


                                AINO

                  That’s not good.


She stops the recording.


                                JAMIE

                  Maybe she dropped it and went back?


                                AINO

                  Battery is almost dead.

                  She wouldn’t leave it.


They look around. Nothing.


                                AINO (CONT’D)

                      (shaken)

                  Henrik gone, now Freja missing?

                  Ei saatana...


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. CAMP / VAN – LATE AFTERNOON


Everyone gathers by the VAN.


Jamie stares at the tires, stunned.


All four are SLASHED. The hood is ajar.


He opens it: the BATTERY is gone.


                                JAMIE

                  ...No.


                                RASMUS

                  What the hell?


                                MAARIKA

                  Who would do that?


                                MARK

                  Maybe... Henrik? Some weird prank?


                                TUOMAS

                  That’s not prank level.

                  That’s psyko perkele level.


                                AINO

                  The road is long. If we walk, it’s hours.


                                MARK

                  Maybe someone local is messing with us.


Jamie looks at the forest, jaw tight.


                                JAMIE

                  We split— two stay in camp, the rest

                  hit the road—


                                AINO

                      (cuts him off)

                  No. We don’t split. That’s how everyone

                  dies in—

                      (catches herself)

                  We stay together. We search near camp, not far.

                  If we find nothing by sunset, we walk the

                  road as one group. Ymmärrättekö?


Nods. Even Mark.


                                                            MONTAGE – EXT. FOREST NEAR CAMP – LATE AFTERNOON


– They move in a loose line, calling names.  

– Rasmus pokes around rocks.  

– Maarika searches near the lake.  

– Mark mutters about horror clichés.  

– Tuomas points out reindeer tracks, trying to lighten things.


The forest is too quiet.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. DEEPER FOREST – SUNSET


Rasmus has wandered slightly ahead, bravado fading.


                                RASMUS

                      (to himself)

                  Just trees. Just dumb trees. See ei ole normaalne...


He hears a creaking sound above.


Looks up—


HENRIK’S BODY hangs upside down from a branch, neck twisted, eyes open. Slowly swaying.


                                RASMUS (CONT’D)

                      (whispers)

                  Oh... shit.


He stumbles back, trips over a root, falls.


The SLASHER steps from behind a tree, holding a SHARPENED WOODEN SPEAR.


Rasmus tries to scream—


The spear drives through his chest, pinning him to the ground.


Blood seeps into moss.


Distantly, we hear the others calling his name.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. EDGE OF CLEARING – SUNSET


The others regroup — minus Rasmus and Freja and Henrik.


                                MAARIKA

                  Where is he?


                                MARK

                  Rasmus! Stop being edgy and answer!


No answer.


                                AINO

                      (voice tight)

                  Everyone back to camp. Now.

                  We stay by the fire. Nobody goes alone.

                  Agree?


                                TUOMAS

                  Yes, boss.


They hurry back.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. SATTASVAARA CAMP – NIGHT


A bigger FIRE burns. Everyone close to it. Fear in the air.


                                MARK

                  Let’s list it. One missing. Two missing.

                  Van’s dead. No signal. Locals told us

                  murder stories.

                      (beat)

                  Anyone else starting to believe the

                  creepy old man?


                                TUOMAS

                  If this is some elaborate Finnish prank,

                  I’m impressed.


                                MAARIKA

                  This is not a prank. Freja wouldn’t

                  disappear. She’d at least leave a note

                  saying "brb murder."


                                JAMIE

                  No one wanders off anymore. We stick

                  together, wait for daylight, then walk

                  the road. All of us. Jookseme koos

                  if we have to.


                                AINO

                  Yeah. Together.


Wind moans through the trees.


A BRANCH SNAPS in the darkness.


They all turn.


At the edge of the firelight, a LARGE FIGURE stands among the trees.


He steps forward into view: COAT, GLOVES, WHITE HOCKEY MASK. Machete in hand.


Silence.


                                MARK

                      (hoarse)

                  Tell me that’s a joke.


                                JAMIE

                      (shouts)

                  Hey! Not funny! Take the mask off. Now!


The figure simply tilts his head.


                                TUOMAS

                      (under breath)

                  Perkele...


The SLASHER strides forward.


Panic erupts.


                                AINO

                  Run!


                                                            CHAOTIC SEQUENCE – EXT. FOREST – NIGHT


TREES whip by as they sprint.


– Mark and Tuomas run together.  

– Aino and Jamie.  

– Maarika breaks off another way.


Heavy FOOTSTEPS of the killer behind them.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. BOULDER – NIGHT


Mark and Tuomas duck behind a mossy ROCK, panting.


                                MARK

                  This is... this is not real.

                  It’s a guy in a mask. Just a guy.


                                TUOMAS

                  Yeah, and the knife is also "just" metal.


Footsteps. Silence.


TWIGS SNAP above.


They look up.


The SLASHER is on top of the boulder, looking down.


                                MARK

                  Oh, boll—


He doesn’t finish. The killer jumps down.


Tuomas shoves Mark aside. The blade cuts Tuomas’ arm instead of his chest.


                                TUOMAS

                  Vittu saatana!


Mark grabs a fallen branch, swings desperately, hits the mask with a dull thunk. The killer staggers but doesn’t fall.


The machete swings again. Mark and Tuomas dive different directions.


The killer chooses MARK, charging after him into the dark.


Tuomas clutches his bleeding arm.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. FOREST – ELSEWHERE – NIGHT


Maarika runs, gasping.


She SLAMS into a tree, falls. Panicked, she crawls under a tangle of dead branches.


Footsteps approach. Stop.


The brush parts slightly — the MASK above her.


She covers her mouth, shaking.


The blade probes into the brush, grazing her leg. She stifles a cry.


After a tense second, the footsteps move away.


She lies there, trembling.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. FOREST – JAMIE & AINO – NIGHT


They duck behind a tree, gasping.


                                JAMIE

                  We can’t outrun him forever.


                                AINO

                  There’s an old hunter’s hut near the

                  ravine. If we find it, there might be

                  tools. Radio. Something. Jotain.


                                JAMIE

                  Lead the way.


They move deeper into the forest.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. FOREST – LATER – NIGHT


Tuomas stumbles through trees, pale, holding his bloody arm.


He leans on a trunk, breathing hard.


A SHADOW looms.


He turns—


The blade drives through his chest from behind.


                                TUOMAS

                      (blood on lips)

                  ...perkele...


The killer lets him fall.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. OLD HUNTER’S HUT – NIGHT


A sagging WOODEN HUT in a clearing. Broken window. Rusted tools.


Aino and Jamie creep up.


                                AINO

                  This is it.


                                                            CUT TO:


INT. HUNTER’S HUT – NIGHT


Dusty, cramped. Old traps, gear, animal skulls.


Jamie tries a broken RADIO. Nothing.


                                JAMIE

                  Of course.


Aino finds an AXE.


                                AINO

                  We can fight back if we see him first.


                                JAMIE

                  We need the others. We can’t just hide.


A CREAK on the porch.


They freeze.


Jamie gestures: stay.


He approaches the door with a rusted METAL BAR.


The DOOR EXPLODES inward. The SLASHER fills the frame.


Jamie swings, slamming the bar into the killer’s shoulder. The killer staggers, then surges in.


Aino swings the axe. The killer batters it aside, sending her crashing into a table.


The machete comes down toward Jamie. He twists — it buries in the wall inches from his head.


                                JAMIE

                      (yells)

                  Aino, run!


He tackles the killer. It’s like hitting a wall, but it buys a moment.


Aino dives through the broken window in a spray of glass.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. HUT – CONTINUOUS


Aino hits the ground outside, rolls. Inside, we hear a vicious STRUGGLE, then a terrible SCREAM.


Silence.


The SLASHER’S SHADOW appears inside the hut, turning toward the window.


Aino, tears in her eyes:


                                AINO

                  Jamie...


She bolts into the trees.


                                                            CUT TO:


EXT. FOREST – LATER – NIGHT


Aino runs, branches slashing her face. She almost collides with—


MAARIKA.


They grab each other, shaking.


                                MAARIKA

                  Aino! Oh my God...


                                AINO

                  Jamie’s dead. Tuomas... maybe.

                  I don’t know.

                      (breathing hard)

                  We have to find Mark, then go to the ravine.

                  There’s a path down. Logging road.

                  We follow it out. Me peame ära minema.


                                MAARIKA

                  Is the mask guy real?


Aino just looks at her. That’s the answer.


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EXT. CLEARING NEAR RAVINE – PRE-DAWN


Trees thin near a steep DROP — a ravine. A narrow ANIMAL TRAIL hugs the edge.


Aino and Maarika move carefully along it.


                                MAARIKA

                  If we fall, we die.


                                AINO

                  If we stay, we die slower.


A weak voice ahead:


                                MARK (O.S.)

                  ...hello? Anyone?


Mark limps into view, shirt torn, bruised, shaken.


                                MARK (CONT’D)

                  I’ve never been so happy to see anyone

                  in my life.


Quick, desperate hug.


                                AINO

                  We’re going down into the ravine. There’s

                  an old logging track by the river.

                  It might lead out.


                                MARK

                  Brilliant. More dangerous terrain.


A HEAVY SNAP behind them.


They turn.


The SLASHER steps onto the trail, blocking the way back. Machete raised.


                                MARK (CONT’D)

                  Of course.


                                AINO

                      (under breath)

                  Ei saatana...


They inch backward along the narrow ledge. Cliff on one side, forest wall on the other.


The killer advances, step by step.


Mark hurls a rock. It hits the killer’s chest, bounces off.


                                MARK

                  He just tanked that like a Marvel villain.


                                MAARIKA

                  We can’t outrun him here.


Ahead, the path narrows, crumbling.


Aino spots a large, loose ROCK near the edge.


                                AINO

                      (low)

                  Okay. I’ll draw him closer. When he’s

                  near that rock, we push. Together.


                                MARK

                  Aino—


                                AINO

                  Three against one. Yhdessä.


The killer raises the blade.


Aino steps slightly forward, voice shaking but loud.


                                AINO (CONT’D)

                      (shouting)

                  Hei! Over here, saatana!

                  You want someone, come get me!


The killer focuses on her, stepping closer, boots grinding gravel at the cliff edge.


She positions by the loose rock.


                                AINO (CONT’D)

                      (to the others, low)

                  Now.


All three throw their weight against the rock and the killer’s midsection.


For a heartbeat, nothing.


Then the edge COLLAPSES.


The rock and the killer tumble into the ravine, crashing off the cliff walls, disappearing into shadow.


A distant THUD.


They collapse on the trail, panting.


                                MARK

                      (shaky)

                  Is it... is it over?


                                AINO

                  I don’t know. En välitä.

                  We’re leaving.


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EXT. RAVINE FLOOR – DAWN


Filtered grey light.


Rocks, broken branches, a smear of BLOOD.


The SLASHER lies twisted among the stones. Mask cracked, staring up.


We HOLD on the image...


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EXT. LOGGING TRACK BY RIVER – MORNING


A muddy TRACK by a small RIVER in the ravine.


Aino, Mark, and Maarika stumble along, exhausted.


In the distance — an ENGINE.


They turn a corner. A small MAINTENANCE TRUCK is parked. A WORKER climbs out, stunned at the sight of them.


                                WORKER

                      (in Finnish, subtitled)

                  What the hell...?


They practically collapse near the truck, sobbing and laughing in relief.


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EXT. RAVINE EDGE / FOREST – LATER


POLICE tape. Finnish POLICE and RESCUE TEAMS swarm.


Aino, Mark, and Maarika sit wrapped in blankets near the truck.


A POLICE OFFICER kneels by Aino.


                                OFFICER

                      (accented English)

                  You say it was a man in a mask?


                                AINO

                  Yes. Big. Strong.

                  He killed them. All of them.


The Officer shares a look with another.


                                OFFICER

                  We’ve heard stories... but this...

                      (shakes head)

                  We will search the ravine.


Aino’s gaze drifts toward the edge.


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EXT. RAVINE FLOOR – LATER


SEARCHERS climb down.


They reach the impact area — broken rock, streaks of blood.


No body.


Just a CRACKED HOCKEY MASK lying among the stones.


A SEARCHER picks it up, uneasy.


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EXT. RAVINE EDGE – CONTINUOUS


From above, Aino watches the mask being raised into view.


Her breath catches.


                                AINO

                      (soft)

                  He’s... gone?


                                OFFICER

                  Maybe the river took him.

                  Or he crawled away.


Aino stares into the trees.


                                AINO

                      (quiet, to herself)

                  Kurat... Herregud...


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EXT. DEEP FOREST – UNKNOWN LOCATION – DAY


Deep in Sattasvaara.


We glide between pines, over bogs, through shafts of light.


We reach a small, hidden CLEARING.


On a tree stump sits the HOCKEY MASK — now further cracked, re-tied with duct tape and wire.


A GLOVED HAND reaches into frame, picks it up.


The mask rises, filling frame.


We hear HEAVY, distorted BREATHING.


SMASH TO BLACK.


                         FADE OUT.


                       END OF DRAFT










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